Nice line and excellent speed control.
Try adding earlier and greater amounts of flexing, tipping, and foot pull back. Work on your absorption/extension range of movement so you can swallow a bump with your legs. Keep the feet close together (horizontal distance). Connect the pelvis to the upper body for stronger CA/CB.
Here's a bump technique thread that might be helpful:
http://www.pmts.org/pmtsforum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=1460And here's a list you can use for honing your MA skills (I keep it on my celphone and read it on the lift once in a while.)
Things to consider for MA:
Is the stance width appropriate for the size of the skier?
Does the release start by flexing the outside leg?
Does LTE tipping lead engagement to the new turn?
Are the feet pulled back at transition?
Is the inside foot held back throughout the turn?
Is there enough CB and CA and is the timing right?
Is the pelvis included in the CB/CA movement?
Strong inside arm?
Is the inside leg flexed as the turn progresses?
Does the outside leg extend naturally (no pushing) as the turn progresses?
Does LTE tipping of the inside foot continue throughout the turn?
Is the skier balanced over the outside ski?
Is there a pole touch and how is the movement and timing?
Alignment - watch the skis and knees carefully - does anything look like it needs go be tipped in or out?